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== Semi-protected edit request on 11 June 2018 ==

Please change <br>

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Since 2000, cloud computing has come into existence. <br>

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Since 2000 cloud computing has come into existence, because in the last days of 1999 a patent was filed for a "one page web" by Hardy Schloer, making it the first known Cloud computing implementation <ref>http://www.krishisanskriti.org/vol_image/04Jul201510072939%20%20%20Shivani%20Jain%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20127-132%20%20%202.pdf</ref>. The patent was put to use in England and Germany<ref>https://patents.justia.com/patent/20030140097</ref> and Mr. Schloer explained the technology as a “method and device for presenting data to a user" consisting of:

* Multiple user applications

* Cloud storage

* Multiple identification providers

* Back-end servers – including plug-in applications

* Multiple tiers of servers capable of handling different end-user devices via the internet

* Built-in security features [[User:CitizenHuman|CitizenHuman]] ([[User talk:CitizenHuman|talk]]) 13:14, 11 June 2018 (UTC)

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In 1999, on December 24, the first known Cloud computing implementation was submitted for patent protection<ref>http://www.krishisanskriti.org/vol_image/04Jul201510072939%20%20%20Shivani%20Jain%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20%20127-132%20%20%202.pdf</ref> and put to use by Hardy Schloer in England and Germany<ref>https://patents.justia.com/patent/20030140097</ref>. Mr. Schloer termed the system a “one page web” and explains the “method and device for presenting data to a user (in what has become known as “the cloud”). It is complete with:

• Multiple user applications

• Cloud storage

• Multiple identification providers

• Back-end servers – including plug-in applications

• Multiple tiers of servers capable of handling different end-user devices via the internet

• Built-in security features [[User:CitizenHuman|CitizenHuman]] ([[User talk:CitizenHuman|talk]]) 13:14, 11 June 2018 (UTC)

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== Semi-protected edit request on 19 June 2018 ==

I would like to enhance the block Platform as a Service, adding information about one more model of PaaS:

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Generally, public cloud service providers like Amazon Web Services (AWS), Oracle, Microsoft and Google own and operate the infrastructure at their data center and access is generally via the Internet. AWS, Oracle, Microsoft, and Google also offer direct connect services called "AWS Direct Connect", "Oracle FastConnect", "Azure ExpressRoute", and "Cloud Interconnect" respectively, such connections require customers to purchase or lease a private connection to a peering point offered by the cloud provider.[40][87]

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Generally, public cloud service providers like Amazon Web Services (AWS), Oracle, Microsoft and Google own and operate the infrastructure at their data center and access is generally via the Internet. AWS, Oracle, Microsoft, and Google also offer direct connect services called "AWS Direct Connect", "Oracle FastConnect", "Azure ExpressRoute", and "Cloud Interconnect" respectively, such connections require customers to purchase or lease a private connection to a peering point offered by the cloud provider. One more model is when PaaS provides its services via hosting partners and their local data centers, like Jelastic PaaS

<ref>https://www.idc.com/getdoc.jsp?containerId=US40613015</ref>

[[User:Mariia Hepalova|Mariia Hepalova]] ([[User talk:Mariia Hepalova|talk]]) 13:51, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

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