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Line 122: You might consider avoiding the repetition of the subject ("the system") by using a semicolon <br/>at the same boundary, instead of a full-stop. The magic of a semicolon is that you can use <br/>"it" to refer right back to the start of the statement. If the second section is still totoo long for your liking, you could split off the last part into a third, final sentence. The text would then look something like this:

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