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===Reply 30-SEP-2019===
{{tq|One of the important goal {{sic}} of the Oracle Database is to build cutting edge technologies like [[Multitenancy]], [[JSON]], [[Analytics]], [[Machine_learning]], [[Blockchain]], and many more, directly within a [[converged infrastructure]] to greatly simplify applications' development and deployment.}} This claim statement has several issues, 2 of which MrOllie mentioned. Another issue is that this appears to be a statement of the company's goals. Describing the object of a company's ambitions or efforts, as well as descriptions of its aims and its desired results, are ultimately not the purpose of the article.
The article is meant primarily to be an accounting of what the company has done — i.e., what it has produced, sold, and encountered as an institution existing in a business marketplace. The realm of the real, or actual, is what Wikipedia deals in, as in what actually occurred during a business's existence. The realm of ideas — such as hopes, desires, goals and aspirations are not the purpose of a Wikipedia page assigned to cover a business.
Now one could say that instead of meaning to write "goals", what was actually meant was to merely describe what the "purposes" of the Oracle database is, and then to list the technologies used by the company, in order to imply that the company's tech does what it's supposed to do....''One of the important goal(s) of the Oracle Database is to build cutting edge technologies like Multitenancy...to greatly simplify applications' development'' is really just saying "The goal of the company is to deliver efficient technology such as project X, a project which carries out its duties efficiently", which is a nice roundabout way of complimenting and thereby promoting the company's products twice in one sentence, which is also not the purpose of the article. Regards, <span style="font-size:75%;border:2px solid red;border-radius:50px;font-color:#00008b">[[User talk:Spintendo|<span style="color:#00008b;"> <b>Spintendo</b> </span>]]</span> 18:19, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
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