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Now one could say that instead of meaning to write "goals", what was actually meant was to merely describe what the "purposes" of the Oracle database is,{{efn|A ''purpose'' is just another way of saying a ''goal''.}} and then to list the technologies used by the company, in order to imply that the company's tech does what it's supposed to do....''One of the important goal(s) of the Oracle Database is to build cutting edge technologies like Multitenancy...to greatly simplify applications' development'' is really just saying "The goal of the company is to deliver efficient technology such as project X, a project which carries out its duties efficiently", which is a nice roundabout way of complimenting and thereby promoting the company's products twice in one sentence, which is also not the purpose of the article. Regards, <span style="font-size:75%;border:2px solid red;border-radius:50px;font-color:#00008b">[[User talk:Spintendo|<span style="color:#00008b;"> <b>Spintendo</b> </span>]]</span> 18:19, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
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Absolutely agree with you. The thing is that all these technologies are already there in the database. So I should rephrase this to list what is in there currently.
Will do it soon.
Thanks
[[User:JFVerrier|JFVerrier]] ([[User talk:JFVerrier|talk]]) 20:00, 30 September 2019 (UTC)JFVerrier
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