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11 April 2017

• 19:5619:56, 11 April 2017 diff hist −5 Michael Bergan Terminology was repetitive
• 19:5519:55, 11 April 2017 diff hist +9 Michael Bergan Information was added
• 19:4219:42, 11 April 2017 diff hist +392 Michael Bergan →Political stances: The previous editor eliminated this, but it is clearly how Michael Bergan voted.
• 19:3519:35, 11 April 2017 diff hist +615 Michael Bergan →Workers' rights: The numbers of those effected by the lowering of the minimum wage was assessed based upon Des Moines Register articles.
• 19:3219:32, 11 April 2017 diff hist +2 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights: Spelling was corrected & a more accurate verb chosen.
• 19:3219:32, 11 April 2017 diff hist +63 Kristi Hager →Political stances: A total was tallied from each of the counties to help the reader assess the data presented.
• 19:2919:29, 11 April 2017 diff hist +916 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights: This information was eliminated as biased. However, it is ccited by the Des Moines Register & the Linn county government in itself. I have added in these citations to show that the Iowa Policy Project is a reputable source.
• 19:0419:04, 11 April 2017 diff hist +13 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights: The raise in the minimum wage had already been voted on but would not be instituted in Polk county until April 2017. The language was changed to reflect that the bill had already passed, though not enacted.
• 13:5113:51, 11 April 2017 diff hist −11 Michael Bergan →Workers' rights: Repetitive language that creates poor prose.
• 13:5013:50, 11 April 2017 diff hist +1,198 Michael Bergan →Workers' rights: Further information about the impact of Bergan's minimum wage vote was added.
• 13:4713:47, 11 April 2017 diff hist +732 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights: Polk county was left off of the list of counties whose minimum wage was decreased. Additional information about the number of workers affected by this vote was added.
• 13:3713:37, 11 April 2017 diff hist +813 Michael Bergan I have added material on Bergan's vote from subcommittee on this abortion bill.
• 13:2813:28, 11 April 2017 diff hist −3 Michael Bergan →Education: Language was redundant.
• 13:2713:27, 11 April 2017 diff hist +793 Michael Bergan →Political stances: The section is relevant because it reflects how Bergan voted. 2nd sentence is also relevant because it recounts how education majors in Bergan's district will seek certification in Minnesota, not Iowa, due to his vote.

10 April 2017

• 04:2204:22, 10 April 2017 diff hist +59 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights: The full effect of her vote was not stated, namely that minimum was was lowered in certain counties. This was clarified.
• 04:2004:20, 10 April 2017 diff hist +80 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights: An incomplete infinitive was placed at the end of a clause. I fixed that & then turned the second dependent clause into an independent clause.
• 04:1504:15, 10 April 2017 diff hist +584 Kristi Hager →Women's & Reproductive Rights: Specific content in Senate File 471 was removed in a partisan fashion.
• 04:0904:09, 10 April 2017 diff hist +563 Michael Bergan →Women's & Reproductive Rights: Accurate information about the content of SF 471 was removed in a partisan manner.
• 03:5703:57, 10 April 2017 diff hist −1 Michael Bergan →Political stances: There were too many "returns" between the paragraphs. I eliminated one of them to make regular spacing.
• 03:5603:56, 10 April 2017 diff hist +782 Michael Bergan →Political stances: The entire section on education was unecessarily eliminated which cited the response by local community members in Decorah
• 03:4603:46, 10 April 2017 diff hist +1,054 Michael Bergan →Workers' rights: Material cited from the local paper was excised by someone who only edits Republican House members in the Iowa Legislature. This material has been returned. Further, whoever made the edits did not know the gender of Mike Bergan.

9 April 2017

• 21:0421:04, 9 April 2017 diff hist −2 Rod Blum →Healthcare: Too many "<" & this was eliminated.
• 21:0321:03, 9 April 2017 diff hist +550 Rod Blum His information about helathcare was updated based upon events from March 2017

7 April 2017

• 01:2201:22, 7 April 2017 diff hist +1,049 Kristi Hager →Women's & Reproductive Rights: These legislative actions were carried out in the last few days & the house journals documenting Hager's vote were just published today. So I included them here.
• 01:1901:19, 7 April 2017 diff hist −1 Michael Bergan →Women's & Reproductive Rights: Inconsistent naming of the amendments to the bill needed to be standardized
• 01:1801:18, 7 April 2017 diff hist +218 Michael Bergan →Women's & Reproductive Rights
• 01:1301:13, 7 April 2017 diff hist +878 Michael Bergan →Women's & Reproductive Rights: Additional legislative actions that Bergan did yesterday were added today
• 00:5100:51, 7 April 2017 diff hist +32 Michael Bergan →Women's & Reproductive Rights
• 00:4400:44, 7 April 2017 diff hist +259 Michael Bergan →Women's & Reproductive Rights: A sentence explaining the felony charges to the doctor was added

2 April 2017

• 04:0304:03, 2 April 2017 diff hist +4 m Michael Bergan →Workers' rights: Definite article was missing
• 04:0204:02, 2 April 2017 diff hist −2 Michael Bergan →Workers' rights: Poor syntax
• 04:0104:01, 2 April 2017 diff hist +833 Michael Bergan →Political stances: An additional political stance & news article from the local paper was added
• 03:5203:52, 2 April 2017 diff hist +781 Michael Bergan →Political stances: Additional information added from the local Decorah paper
• 03:2503:25, 2 April 2017 diff hist −4 Michael Bergan →Reproductive Rights: Eliminated the word "all" because it was inaccurate & the bill permits doctors in certain instances to allow abortions
• 03:2403:24, 2 April 2017 diff hist −8 Michael Bergan →Reproductive Rights: Syntax was hard to comprehend
• 03:2303:23, 2 April 2017 diff hist +396 Michael Bergan →Political stances: Additional Vote from this week added

1 April 2017

• 23:3723:37, 1 April 2017 diff hist −8 Kristi Hager →Political stances: Redundant adverb
• 23:3623:36, 1 April 2017 diff hist +1 Kristi Hager →Political stances: Poor grammar & use of the subordinate clause
• 23:3623:36, 1 April 2017 diff hist +43 Kristi Hager →Workers' rights
• 23:3523:35, 1 April 2017 diff hist +464 Kristi Hager →Political stances
• 23:3123:31, 1 April 2017 diff hist 0 Michael Breitbach Improper Capitalization
• 20:0720:07, 1 April 2017 diff hist +3,398 N Kristi Hager Creation of Kristi Hager's Page

31 March 2017

• 21:0021:00, 31 March 2017 diff hist −1 Michael Bergan →Political stances: A space was superfluous
• 20:5220:52, 31 March 2017 diff hist +659 Michael Bergan →Political stances
• 17:2617:26, 31 March 2017 diff hist −3 Michael Bergan No edit summary
• 17:0417:04, 31 March 2017 diff hist +2 Michael Bergan Poor syntax
• 16:5516:55, 31 March 2017 diff hist −87 Michael Bergan No edit summary
• 16:4916:49, 31 March 2017 diff hist +4 Michael Bergan No edit summary
• 16:4716:47, 31 March 2017 diff hist −46 Michael Bergan No edit summary
• 16:4716:47, 31 March 2017 diff hist +3,071 N Michael Bergan Creation of page for Local Politician