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Latest comment: 18 years ago by Jjhake in topic Augustine contribution
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Augustine contribution
You included a new an important detail about the influence of Plato, but did not insert it into the most appropriate ___location. You put it at the end of a sentence by another student. That sentence about his conversion, however, duplicated the more extended description of his conversion further down in the article. It might have been best to suggest starting a new paragraph after this discussion of his conversion regarding some of the ways in which he broke with neo-Platonism when he became a Christian. Grade: 2.5 --Jjhake 01:52, 1 October 2006 (UTC)