User contributions for Demeter~enwiki

29 July 2020

• 12:4812:48, 29 July 2020 diff hist 0 m Anarchism →Evolutionary tactics: Moved apostrophe one to the right.

25 July 2020

• 11:0311:03, 25 July 2020 diff hist −2 m Anarchism Removed a "the" from where it didn't belong, and also changed a verb, which pertained to a multiple subject, to a plural verb form.
• 11:0111:01, 25 July 2020 diff hist 0 m Anarchism Put an apostrophe where it belonged.

3 May 2020

• 07:5507:55, 3 May 2020 diff hist +3 m Sense and Sensibility →Critical views: I just added the word "is" where it was needed.

24 March 2020

• 04:4304:43, 24 March 2020 diff hist 0 m What Is Enlightenment? →Kant and religion: The comma was incorrect, so I replaced it with a colon.
• 04:4204:42, 24 March 2020 diff hist 0 What Is Enlightenment? Undid revision 947078896 by Demeter~enwiki (talk) Tag: Undo
• 04:4004:40, 24 March 2020 diff hist 0 m What Is Enlightenment? →Kant and religion: The comma was incorrect; I replaced it with a semicolon.

6 February 2020

• 09:4609:46, 6 February 2020 diff hist 0 m The 1900 Island →Plot: Mens' is not a word!

14 January 2020

• 11:3711:37, 14 January 2020 diff hist −1 m National Lampoon's Doon →Comedic style: Removed a duplicate period.

13 September 2019

• 07:5707:57, 13 September 2019 diff hist +3 m Westlake Village, California →2010: Added a hyphen and a "of"
• 07:5607:56, 13 September 2019 diff hist +4 m Westlake Village, California →Climate
• 07:5407:54, 13 September 2019 diff hist +4 m Westlake Village, California →History: Added an "and" to make a sentence grammatically correct

27 August 2019

• 15:3115:31, 27 August 2019 diff hist −1 Western world →Latin America and the Orthodox world: Removed an incorrect "s" from a verb. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 August 2019

• 21:2821:28, 17 August 2019 diff hist +7 Women in the Victorian era Minor edit: added "to put" to make sure all the phrases in a list were verb phrases. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 August 2019

• 02:0202:02, 15 August 2019 diff hist +3 m Death of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart →Theories involving homicide

6 June 2019

• 10:3710:37, 6 June 2019 diff hist 0 m Avoidant personality disorder →Prognosis: I don't think "Being that" is a correct phrase, so I changed it to "Given that".

4 June 2019

• 21:2521:25, 4 June 2019 diff hist +4 m Monty Python →Theatre: Added an "and" to make sentence grammatically correct.

9 May 2019

• 09:0409:04, 9 May 2019 diff hist 0 m Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky →Critics: Changed "has," which didn't belong there, to "was."

30 April 2019

• 06:2406:24, 30 April 2019 diff hist −12 m Fear of Flying (novel) →Feminist influences then and now: "In reality" was stated twice in one sentence; I removed one of them.

29 April 2019

• 01:5201:52, 29 April 2019 diff hist −3 Somersville, California No edit summary
• 01:5201:52, 29 April 2019 diff hist +5 m Somersville, California Changed "amount" to "number" because "graves" is a regular noun. Changed to "many of which contain" when referencing the graves.

22 April 2019

• 06:3406:34, 22 April 2019 diff hist −8 m San Ángel Inn Removed two "its"'s to create parallel construction in the sentence.
• 06:0206:02, 22 April 2019 diff hist −1 m Mexican cuisine →Food and festivals: Removed an unneeded right bracket.
• 06:0006:00, 22 April 2019 diff hist −2 m Mexican cuisine →Food and festivals: Changed "them" to "it" to match the subject "corn".

19 March 2019

• 09:0309:03, 19 March 2019 diff hist +2 Poplin 2 minor changes: changed "Brittain" to "British," and added an "it" where needed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 March 2019

• 10:2710:27, 16 March 2019 diff hist −1 m A Rainy Day in New York →Me Too movement responses: Removed an unnecessary comma.

1 March 2019

• 01:1901:19, 1 March 2019 diff hist +3 Stephen Porges Minor edit: aded an "and" to improve the parallel construction of the sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 February 2019

• 08:2408:24, 24 February 2019 diff hist −8 m Old Point Comfort Added the state to the name of the city where the subject is.

14 February 2019

• 00:5500:55, 14 February 2019 diff hist −1 Industrial Revolution →Causes in Britain: Minor edit: removed unnecessary comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 February 2019

• 09:2909:29, 1 February 2019 diff hist +1 m Buckminster Fuller →Depression and epiphany: Added an apostrophe for a possessive.

25 December 2018

• 08:2408:24, 25 December 2018 diff hist +3 Kidderminster carpet industry →Early trade: Added an "and" near the end of a list, where needed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 December 2018

• 17:1517:15, 11 December 2018 diff hist +4 Abjection →In social critical theory: Added an "and" that was needed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 December 2018

• 23:5823:58, 10 December 2018 diff hist −1 Alan Watts →Personal life: Minor edit: removed unnecessary and intrusive comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 November 2018

• 11:4411:44, 26 November 2018 diff hist −6 Limberlost Swamp The word "acres" was repeated twice in a row; I removed one of them. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 November 2018

• 19:1219:12, 16 November 2018 diff hist +1 Black Canadians →First black people in Canada: Minor edit: added comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 October 2018

• 18:3218:32, 9 October 2018 diff hist −6 Fremont, California →Mission San Jose District: Minor edit: corrected grammar. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:2918:29, 9 October 2018 diff hist +4 Fremont, California →Niles District: Minor edits: put hyphens in coast-to-coast, and added "the" to Transcontinental Railroad. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 September 2018

• 00:3700:37, 19 September 2018 diff hist +1 Californios →Rancho culture: Minor edit: added a comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:3500:35, 19 September 2018 diff hist −3 Californios →Ranchos: Minor edit: wording was awkward. I smoothed it out. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 September 2018

• 11:3911:39, 14 September 2018 diff hist −5 Park and ride →Kiss and ride / kiss and fly Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 June 2018

• 03:4703:47, 9 June 2018 diff hist −227 m Ballade des dames du temps jadis →In popular culture: The item about the phrase being quoted in Downton Abbey was repeated, so I removed one of the repetitions.

14 May 2018

• 14:1314:13, 14 May 2018 diff hist 0 Whale shark The sentence didn't make grammatical sense, with an "are" between 2 phrases. I changed it to an "and". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 May 2018

• 04:5404:54, 7 May 2018 diff hist −37 Macbeth →Sources: I took out "as it not possible for trees to move," since it was overly wordy and didn't add anything to the sense of the paragraph. Everyone knows trees can't move.

3 May 2018

• 06:5606:56, 3 May 2018 diff hist 0 m Calexico (band) Replaced comma at end of sentence with a period.

23 April 2018

• 09:4609:46, 23 April 2018 diff hist 0 m Adolescents (band) →Formation and first recordings: 1980: Comma was in the wrong place

3 April 2018

• 19:4219:42, 3 April 2018 diff hist −1 Edwin Landseer →Painting: Removed unnecessary comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 March 2018

• 21:0421:04, 22 March 2018 diff hist +3 m Fresno chile Corrected grammar.

16 March 2018

• 09:1809:18, 16 March 2018 diff hist −1 Around the World in Eighty Days →Real life imitations: Removed unnecessary comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 March 2018

• 05:1205:12, 2 March 2018 diff hist −2 m Arctic Monkeys →Musical style and influences: The subject of the phrase was "songs," so the verb had to agree.
• 01:2701:27, 2 March 2018 diff hist +2 m Peter Warlock →Death: Introduced a paragraph break between two fairly unrelated topics.