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The article is dreadfully written. Among the problems that I could point out are:

  • atrocious grammar and syntax leading to incomprehensibility in places;
  • preposterous diction which would do a bureaucrat proud;
  • use of unexplained technical terms that make reading difficult for the uninitiated;
  • use of Imperial measurements throughout without conversions to SI.
  • at least one reference to a thing that doesn't exist (namely the railway -- that packed up years ago).

It's a big job, and I may get around to it myself someday. Right now, though, this is an AWFUL article.Kelisi 01:44, 11 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]


I agree completely. I will do what I can.Silverchemist 06:07, 15 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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