Wikipedia talk:WikiProject User warnings/Testing/CorenSearchBot
I expect you guys know where you're going with this, but my first impression is that the tone is a bit... off? Maybe it's the fact that I'm an old hand, but I'd feel a little bit patronized by the current wording. I dunno, I guess it sounds a little K12. :-)
Then again, maybe you've got the past experience to know this is what works best. — Coren (talk) 22:01, 13 December 2011 (UTC)