Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1

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Reviewer: Jamesx12345 (talk · contribs) 22:19, 26 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this on in the next few days. Jamesx12345 22:19, 26 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • Intro seems a bit verbose. Perhaps another picture of the Grasshopper - to illustrate the concept of a rocket landing - would help?
  • "occur at a velocity of approximately" - km/s would be adequate here, I think.