Talk:Public Protection Classification Program
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Zackmann08 in topic Follow up
@Zackmann08:Here's what I've got so far if you want to add anything to it. I'd like to push it into article space and have it go live. Maxwellwarner (talk) 00:52, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Maxwellwarner: my only comment would be avoid having headings that just have one sentence below them. Instead of:
===Membership=== *The department must respond at least four firefighters to structure fires. The chief may account for one of those required positions. ===Training=== *The department must conduct at least two hours of training every two months for active firefighters.
Try this:
;Membership :The department must respond at least four firefighters to structure fires. The chief may account for one of those required positions. ;Training :The department must conduct at least two hours of training every two months for active firefighters.
This second alternative will give you:
- Membership
- The department must respond at least four firefighters to structure fires. The chief may account for one of those required positions.
- Training
- The department must conduct at least two hours of training every two months for active firefighters.
Headings are for big sections. Does that make sense? --Zackmann08 (talk) 00:59, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
Follow up
One additional thing, I would work to get a bit more context in the intro. A good 4-6 sentence paragraph to open the page. I would also find some DOCUMENTED examples of notable departments with ISO ratings. Make sense? --Zackmann08 (talk) 01:01, 6 March 2015 (UTC)