 | Sunkern was nominated as a good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (September 29, 2006, reviewed version). There are suggestions below for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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GA failed
- 1. Well written? Fail (Though well referenced)
- 2. Factually accurate? O.K. (Though well referenced)
- 3. Broad in coverage? O. K.
- 4. Neutral point of view? Pass
- 5. Article stability? Pass
- 6. Images? Pass
Additional comments :
- Verb tense is not consistent.
- Needs a throughout copyedit as it now reads like a manual more than an encyclopedic article. (e.g. A Sunkern featured in Episode 189, "Moving Picture", inwhich the group, including Todd, visit a fertile mountain, which has been frozen because of an Articuno, the Pokémon Todd is attempting to photograph. )
- A sentence like Sunkern's statistics are abysmally low, the lowest in the game. is a bit POV with such a word as abysmal.
- The group came across an abandoned Sunkern, and gave it to a visiting old couple in the area. In return for aiding it, the Pokémon evolved with the help of the Sun Stone Ash won at the Bug Catching Contest, allowing the couple to take their picture with a Sunflora, as they did the day they married. doesn't make any sense ... if they gave the Pokémon away how can he use the Sun Stone on the Pokémon.
- An appearance/characteristics section would be a nice addition. Maybe a biology section too.
This article needs a bit of reworking ... if you are interested to have more insight into what you should change, please request more assistance or a deeper review on my talk page. Lincher 18:14, 29 September 2006 (UTC)