Draft talk:Riaz Shah

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Latest comment: 10 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, and thank you for reviewing this draft. Since the last decline, I’ve made the following improvements:

• Added multiple independent secondary sources (BBC, Enfield Independent, CNN Indonesia, Kompas, London Loves Business, TechUK) to demonstrate significant coverage.
• Balanced primary references (EY, Hult) with reliable third-party coverage (e.g. TechUK on EY Badges).
• Addressed the earlier WP:EL concern by moving all external links into a dedicated External links section.
• Ensured neutral tone throughout.
• Added language tags for non-English sources.
• OBE recognition is cited via the Muslim Council of Britain as an official source.

I believe the draft now meets Wikipedia’s notability and verifiability standards for biographies of living persons.

Thank you for your consideration. Abby Buko (talk) 22:37, 22 August 2025 (UTC)Reply