Talk:Systematic Alien Verification for Entitlements

Latest comment: 25 days ago by Vipul in topic needs editing

needs editing

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Vipul, I saw you created this article and basically its not been altered much- is this one of the ones you paid someone to write I couldnt find it in the long list on your page.-May I make some suggestions to improve?

First, lead does not at all reflect the body.

section headings are way too long and repeat page name .

lots of redundancy / excessive wordiness.

unfortunately refs have been lost because they werent archived since 2016. Wuerzele (talk) 01:40, 1 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Wuerzele I wrote this article myself back in 2016, but am not responsible for recent additions. All paid content was written by the respective paid person under their account; this one is from my own account. Vipul (talk) 07:54, 4 August 2025 (UTC)Reply