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Article title
Phacellophora camtschatica
Article Evaluation
This article has the start of a lead. However, it does not contain a brief description of the article's major sections. It lacks enough information and does not offer enough. The content of this article is relevant to the topic, but relatively old. Additionally, more content is needed to complete this article. The tone of the article is neutral, with no bias. The article is lacking sources, additionally sources are somewhat older, but still work. This article is poorly, if at all, organized. No sections exist making it not enjoyable to read. Images and media need to be used more to help the article. Article is rated as a start by two WikiProjects. Though, not much is happening in the talk section. Overall, this article needs a lot of work done.
Sources
Moriarty PE, Andrews KS, Harvey CJ, Kawase M (2012) Vertical and horizontal movement patterns of scyphozoan jellyfish in a fjord-like estuary. Mar Ecol Prog Ser 455: 1-12. https://doi.org/10.3354/meps09783
Scyphomedusae and Cubomedusae from the Eastern Pacific by Larson, R.J.
Life cycle of Phacellophora camtschatica by Chad L. Widmer
Strand, S.W. & Hamner, W.M. Mar. Biol. (1988) 99: 409. https://doi.org/10.1007/BF02112134

Article title
Chrysaora fuscescens
Article Evaluation: Article contains some spelling/grammatical errors that needs to be changed. Though, most of the content is relevant to the topic. However, few sources are used, leading to claims missing citations. The tone of the article is neutral and the article contains a variety of information. Content is present, but could be improved upon. Several sections are far to short and need to be expanded upon. Finally, sources should be changed and more primary sources should be used.
Sources: Tentacle Transcriptome and Venom Proteome of the Pacific Sea Nettle, Chrysaora fuscescens; Life Cycle of Chrysaora fuscescens (Cnidaria: Scyphozoa) and a Key to Sympatric Ephyrae

Article title: Aurelia aurita
Article Evaluation: Full of easy to read content that is neutral and unbiased. Contains lots of sources from reputable sources, though some statements are made without citation. Structure and organization are relatively good, but is missing some important sections. Could also use some more diverse media/pictures.
Sources: Morphology, fluid motion and predation by the scyphomedusa Aurelia aurita; Grazing by the jellyfish, Aurelia aurita , on microzooplankton