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Article Drafting

The article I have chosen is English Language in Southern England. There aren;t any obvious errors that I have yet to catch but there is definitely much more to add to this page. It contains a lot of sub categories, such as certain cities in Southern England. Only a couple have a good thorough explanation of them but some have minimal written about it. I think I could possibly add more to it. The article doesn't have. I know places like London, Essex, Cockney, and Surrey, among others have very distinct accents even though they are all fairly near each other. I would like to maybe mention some famous people who attain these accents to be able to show an example of what it sounds like and how they differentiate. I will be able to add and show more of what I plan on doing in week 11 where i begin to draft everything together.

Draft Expansion

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To add on to what i mentioned last week. I will still be attempting to add on to certain cities that need more depth and information on their dialects. I will try to add more citations where citations are needed. Such as history of a dialect or where/how a dialect/term came to be. Some spots just say something that people do/say regarding to their accent but do not give a reference to how or who does it. I will probably try to double check sources and if they need fixing i will do so to make it more accurate. I will still be attempting to (if applicable) add a famous figure from the dialect to give a good example of how it is spoke and possible express difference in the way they sound. Some of these subheadings regarding the cities come are tied back to a bigger article, so I will try to add more to make sure there is enough information to give people a real sense on what the accent is like in regards to the others in the general region. Many of cities also lack some examples of how they say things so I will attempt at finding a way to depict that. I definitely welcome any criticism or advice on what I have laid out so far. — Preceding unsigned comment added by OlenkaStewart (talk • contribs) 08:12, 26 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Peer review: I didn't receive a review from any peers so I will respond to feedback from Mr. Cotter.

I will definitely start to build on my draft more on what I have been talking about doing. I am still trying to understand and figure the whole thing step by step and how to expand the sections with more information and fix cites. I will go back to the training modules and get more information so that i am fully prepared to begin sketching the ideas in writing and showing what I have so far. Thank you very much for the feedback and I will strive to follow your advice.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by OlenkaStewart (talk • contribs) 06:45, 2 April 2018 (UTC)Reply